I really liked the images you used for your poem, it sped my understanding tenfold of this piece. I also really liked the choice of words you wanted to accentuate as well as the pacing of your words on the video, great job of Moviemaker :) Your overall effect/tone of a woman coming out of a relationship was well interpreted, and powerful.
This poem is quite emotional and relates to a lot of real situations in relationships. I thought you had an emotional tone to you voice, which fit well with this poem. Your image choices gave a lighter feel which softened the mood but they were all connected together great and clearly delivered the main idea/realization the poem was conveying. well done.
Nice job. The music is appropriate and sweet. The images are great. The content of this poem is true. Some men do not appreciate what women do for us. We have to work as a team (man and woman) to be happy and have a successful society.
many males do refuse to let a woman become who she really should be and blossom and the images and text you used together brought your poem and its meaning together perfectly. the music was set at a perfect level. the tone of your voice wasn't too loud, or too quiet. this was done very well
I liked your choice of poem, I believe that we as women can relate to this poem. Your tone is very effective on the emotions of this poem. Great choice of music. The imagery was very touching and it made the poem easy to understand.
You read as if you have either experienced or know of a situation like this, great tone! Could really feel it...it sounded as if she was in a one sided relationship n that should never happen... we always need to meet in the middle! Great job. Imagery was also superb giving clear visual understanding of what being read..
I really liked the images you used for your poem, it sped my understanding tenfold of this piece. I also really liked the choice of words you wanted to accentuate as well as the pacing of your words on the video, great job of Moviemaker :) Your overall effect/tone of a woman coming out of a relationship was well interpreted, and powerful.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the gentle music and as well the images. I quite enjoyed the picture of the man in a diaper, very humorous!
ReplyDeletei love this poem so much...so true and the words and images are funny. Great tone!
ReplyDeleteThis poem is quite emotional and relates to a lot of real situations in relationships. I thought you had an emotional tone to you voice, which fit well with this poem. Your image choices gave a lighter feel which softened the mood but they were all connected together great and clearly delivered the main idea/realization the poem was conveying. well done.
ReplyDeleteNice job. The music is appropriate and sweet. The images are great. The content of this poem is true. Some men do not appreciate what women do for us. We have to work as a team (man and woman) to be happy and have a successful society.
ReplyDeletemany males do refuse to let a woman become who she really should be and blossom and the images and text you used together brought your poem and its meaning together perfectly. the music was set at a perfect level. the tone of your voice wasn't too loud, or too quiet. this was done very well
ReplyDeleteI liked your choice of poem, I believe that we as women can relate to this poem. Your tone is very effective on the emotions of this poem. Great choice of music. The imagery was very touching and it made the poem easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteYou read as if you have either experienced or know of a situation like this, great tone! Could really feel it...it sounded as if she was in a one sided relationship n that should never happen... we always need to meet in the middle! Great job. Imagery was also superb giving clear visual understanding of what being read..
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