Fantastic. I think your choice not use music was great, as the tone of voice used made you feel the poems intensity. The lack of music to correspond to the music as a soft voice. The imagery was well chosen to back up the lack of music as well. Great Job!
I really enjoyed the pacing of your vocals, they are timed very well. The images that you used are also well interpreted. Your interpretation with the imagery gave the piece a unique perspective, I liked how you started out with 'happy' and 'pleasant' than fades to sadness. Your overall effect was strong with the imagery used and tone of your voice :)
Good job Vivian, you set a good tone and the pictures you picked really made the poem come alive for me. And I agree with Drew that you had a nice pace in your vocals. :)
Your tone was awesome, very soft and passionate! The images shown, (especially the flowers upon the bed) were excellent to go with the flow of the poem!
You can really feel the deepness of this poem. Your vocals were greatly done, i think you got the tone and the pace down which empowered the poem that much more. Your images are beautiful and went perfectly with your timing and choice selection of writing. Your work really showed you understood the meaning and feeling. Good job I enjoyed it.
Fantastic. I think your choice not use music was great, as the tone of voice used made you feel the poems intensity. The lack of music to correspond to the music as a soft voice. The imagery was well chosen to back up the lack of music as well.
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I really enjoyed the pacing of your vocals, they are timed very well. The images that you used are also well interpreted. Your interpretation with the imagery gave the piece a unique perspective, I liked how you started out with 'happy' and 'pleasant' than fades to sadness. Your overall effect was strong with the imagery used and tone of your voice :)
ReplyDeleteGood job Vivian, you set a good tone and the pictures you picked really made the poem come alive for me. And I agree with Drew that you had a nice pace in your vocals. :)
ReplyDeleteYour tone was awesome, very soft and passionate! The images shown, (especially the flowers upon the bed) were excellent to go with the flow of the poem!
ReplyDeleteGreat tone! Really enjoyed the pace of your vocals, it built a nice intensity
ReplyDeleteReally liked it, perfect pace, tone, and pictures. Really well done!
ReplyDeleteYou can really feel the deepness of this poem. Your vocals were greatly done, i think you got the tone and the pace down which empowered the poem that much more. Your images are beautiful and went perfectly with your timing and choice selection of writing. Your work really showed you understood the meaning and feeling. Good job I enjoyed it.
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