The Imagery chosen to reflect the tone of the poem strikes at the emotions. I felt as If I were hearing this from a friend, and old lost friend. Feeling overwhelmed with sadness. I read the poem in the textbook and found that you captured its essence. Well done!
Hearing the tone of this poem makes me very sad, it catches my attention. The images chosen had strong, and deep sadness. I felt the want to help this person from drowning.
You set the tone really well with your pictures, you music selection and with the pace that you spoke. You made me feel as though I was there and I too-like Katherine-wanted to help the person to keep them from drowning. Good job portraying this poem!
On behalf of Vanessa C. "This was fantastic! I could feel his pain, the desperate call for help! Your tone was absolutely perfect! The Images suited this poem and were timed perfectly. I think you mastered the movie maker! Overall you did a fantastic job understanding this poem, the situation, the tone, and the images. Great work! Loved the music as well, it added a lot to the tone."
This is a great video. The sadness of this video reminds me of the nature accident in Slave Lake recently. The video itself suits the video very well and the music as well.
The tone of your voice is great! The music is sad like this poem. The images are good and express the meaning of the poem. Dramatic and sad poem. Good music!
the music, tone and the way you spoke pulled at my heart, someone is in too far into something and needs help getting back out, it is truly amazing the way you had this video put together
Its almost as if you understand the situation or essence of the poem entirely.climbed right into the authors head. Great visual and audio components will capture any viewer and send them into thought... great job!
The Imagery chosen to reflect the tone of the poem strikes at the emotions. I felt as If I were hearing this from a friend, and old lost friend. Feeling overwhelmed with sadness. I read the poem in the textbook and found that you captured its essence. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHearing the tone of this poem makes me very sad, it catches my attention. The images chosen had strong, and deep sadness. I felt the want to help this person from drowning.
ReplyDeleteYou set the tone really well with your pictures, you music selection and with the pace that you spoke. You made me feel as though I was there and I too-like Katherine-wanted to help the person to keep them from drowning. Good job portraying this poem!
ReplyDeleteSuper eerie and intense! Your voice while spoken was perfect for your poem, really good job! ( I got goosebumps!)
ReplyDeleteWell Done! I really liked the tone and pace of the poem. Really gave a chance for the images to set in. Everything worked together great!!
ReplyDeleteOn behalf of Vanessa C. "This was fantastic! I could feel his pain, the desperate call for help! Your tone was absolutely perfect! The Images suited this poem and were timed perfectly. I think you mastered the movie maker! Overall you did a fantastic job understanding this poem, the situation, the tone, and the images. Great work! Loved the music as well, it added a lot to the tone."
ReplyDeleteThis is a great video. The sadness of this video reminds me of the nature accident in Slave Lake recently. The video itself suits the video very well and the music as well.
ReplyDeleteYou set the tone so well with your vocals, images and music! it was almost heart breaking to watch! amazing job!
ReplyDeleteI could feel the pain, as soon as you started to talk, and the pictures and music just made it more sad! Great job, with everything!
ReplyDeleteThe tone of your voice is great! The music is sad like this poem. The images are good and express the meaning of the poem. Dramatic and sad poem. Good music!
ReplyDeletethe music, tone and the way you spoke pulled at my heart, someone is in too far into something and needs help getting back out, it is truly amazing the way you had this video put together
ReplyDeleteIts almost as if you understand the situation or essence of the poem entirely.climbed right into the authors head. Great visual and audio components will capture any viewer and send them into thought... great job!
ReplyDeleteYou did such a great job with the tone of your voice. This poem sounded really great and you did an awesome job. Well done =)
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