The poem that you chose is very beautiful, I really like the connection between making love and the child coming into the room after. The images that you used really showed the love and togetherness that I believe the poem was meant to inspire. Your recording was also very well done, I liked how you were talking separately and then came together in the middle it fit well with the context of the poem. Great job :D
The way you two read the poem was very well done, reading at separate and then together was a good idea to use! The music did get a little too loud while you were reading but other than that little bit of constructive criticism, it was very well done! :)
Good job! I agree with Dawn and Terri reading at separate and then together was a good idea. This a special video. The images that you used are suitable for this poem.
I really liked how you both read the poem, it made it more meaningful. The images you choose suited the poem well. I love this poem good choice, and you have good use and timing with movie maker.
This is awesome guys...the tones are great and the theme changed at the begining of the poem but you guys do a good good telling us what is being said to the audience.
Good job! I like specially the tone when you talked together was great. This is a love situation that frequently happens. The images of a family are excellent. Now, I remember when I used to visit my parent's bedroom long time ago.
the music gets a tad loud while you were reading, but beyond that the way you brought the poem together by talking separately then together was beautifully done. now to get the images of a scared child back out of my head
The poem that you chose is very beautiful, I really like the connection between making love and the child coming into the room after. The images that you used really showed the love and togetherness that I believe the poem was meant to inspire. Your recording was also very well done, I liked how you were talking separately and then came together in the middle it fit well with the context of the poem. Great job :D
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ReplyDeleteThe way you two read the poem was very well done, reading at separate and then together was a good idea to use! The music did get a little too loud while you were reading but other than that little bit of constructive criticism, it was very well done! :)
ReplyDeleteGood job! I agree with Dawn and Terri reading at separate and then together was a good idea. This a special video. The images that you used are suitable for this poem.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you both read the poem, it made it more meaningful. The images you choose suited the poem well. I love this poem good choice, and you have good use and timing with movie maker.
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome guys...the tones are great and the theme changed at the begining of the poem but you guys do a good good telling us what is being said to the audience.
ReplyDeleteGood job! I like specially the tone when you talked together was great. This is a love situation that frequently happens. The images of a family are excellent. Now, I remember when I used to visit my parent's bedroom long time ago.
ReplyDeletethe music gets a tad loud while you were reading, but beyond that the way you brought the poem together by talking separately then together was beautifully done. now to get the images of a scared child back out of my head
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